Killing your darlings means cutting the lines you love most when they do not serve the video. If a favorite sentence slows the pace, confuses the point, or only pleases you, it has to go.
The hard part is not spotting these lines. The hard part is that they are good. They are often the best written thing in the draft, which is exactly why they are dangerous.
A weak line is easy to cut because there is nothing to defend. A strong line fights back. It has rhythm and wit and a clever turn of phrase, so you keep it even when it drags the section off course.
The result is a script that reads like a display for your prose and a slog for the audience. They came for the idea, not the writing, and every detour makes them work harder to stay with you.
If you love a line too much to test it, you are not protecting the line. You are protecting your ego at the audience's expense.
Read the section without the line. If the meaning survives and the pace improves, the line was decoration. If the section collapses, you found something structural and it stays.
Ask one more question: did I write this line for the viewer or for me. Honest answers are uncomfortable and useful in equal measure.
Do not delete a darling forever. Move it to a file. Cut lines often fit a later video or a different section where they finally earn their place.
That file also stops the cycle of re-adding the same sentence three revisions later. You keep the line, just not here.
The first time you cut a line you adore, it stings. The tenth time, you start to feel the relief, because the section gets sharper and the audience gets a smoother ride.
Revision is not an attack on your writing. It is a bet that the video matters more than any single sentence, and that bet wins more often than not.
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